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Complicated HR comms are a problem.   They make sense in our HR bubble. But confuse employees.   When that’s true? You’ve lost. 3 tips for simplifying your HR communications: 1️⃣ Remove redundant information   ❌ Employees are required to submit a requisition form prior to receiving reimbursement for those expenses that are reimbursable under the company’s expense reimbursement policy.   ✅ Employees must fill out a requisition form to be reimbursed for expenses. 2️⃣ Simplify your word choice   ❌ Your benefit plan provides coverage for a range of preventive and diagnostic services, and you will have access to a network of preferred providers for all of your healthcare needs.   ✅ Your plan covers a wide range of health services, and you can choose from a list of preferred providers.   3️⃣ Remove filler language   ❌ Please provide feedback on the extent to which organizational objectives are being met, and the degree to which you feel empowered in your role.   ✅ Let us know if we're meeting our goals and if you feel empowered in your role.   The world of HR can be difficult enough for employees to navigate. Don’t add to that complication with your messaging. Simplify. --------------------------------------------------------   ♻ Repost if you found this helpful and follow me, Amy Mencarelli, to grow your HR career.

Kylie Egan

Retirement Reinvented for HR Leaders | Fund Manager | Breaking Generational Cycles in Financial Wellness | Building Wealth & Financial Freedom

5mo

Love this concept, simplicity always goes farther in my book.

Raelynn Randall, MHR, MBA

Culture & Strategy Coach | Elevating the Work Experience

5mo

Amy Mencarelli, PHR, MBA, this is such a crucial reminder for all of us in HR. Clear communication is key to fostering a positive workplace culture. Simplifying our messages not only helps employees understand their options but also empowers them to engage more fully. Thank you for sharing these valuable tips!

Michele Schroeder

Learning and Development Program Manager | People Program Manager | Learning Experience Partner | 10+ Years Leading Strategic Projects and Developing Data-Driven Programs

5mo

Completely agree—simplicity is key. Concise and clear messaging ensures employees know exactly what is needed and why. This approach not only prevents miscommunication but also makes things globally friendly, as clear, straightforward language is easier for everyone to understand across different cultures and languages.

Robb Hassa, PHR

People Operations | People Analytics | People Systems

5mo

That final example brings me back to all the times I've designed engagement surveys- I always loved figuring out how the language being used could be misunderstood/misconstrued and how we could simplify it as much as possible to get feedback on what we actually wanted feedback on.

Evan Wood, Ph.D., SHRM-SCP

Strategic | Futurist | Creative | Problem-Solver | Enabler | 🎙️Host of The Pivot Perspective podcast on Spotify

5mo

Excellent advice. This is a new way I have used AI. I now write all the message I want, submit it to AI and ask it to optimize in the clearest, simplest language for best understanding of employee group XYZ (and may add further descriptions of desired outcomes/actions of the messaging). What I get back is always clearer.

Simplify, simplify, simplify.

Jo Zulaica

EQ 4 You! | Leadership Trainer for Top Tech & Travel Companies | Executive Coach & Workshop Facilitator @ Google | Speaker | Tour Guide Turned EQ Expert

5mo

"Make it so simple that your 7-year old would understand" = great advice I use anytime I'm trying to craft a message (verbal or written!). Nice post.

Rosanna Del Rio

HR Operations | Total Rewards | EE Engagement | HR Analytics | Internal Communication | Process Improvement | Compensation

5mo

Less is more, especially when you only have employee’s attention for a short time period.

Dilan Kurt

Inventing Vibe Recruiting | CEO @ NovaForge | 10x Hiring with AI that Feels Human

5mo

Clear, concise messaging helps employees focus on what really matters, instead of getting lost in the jargon.

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