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Head of Brand and Content at MFG Health Consulting

This is one of the biggest mistakes I've corrected in my copywriting: It's writing as if you’re talking to an audience. For example, I used to write stuff like this: "We all know that eating well isn't easy." Or... "Many people have a problem understanding money." That's writing to a group, rather than one person. And it's a big mistake, as the reader doesn't feel you're addressing their specific concerns and problems. Instead, copy should feel personal - as if you're talking to someone one on one. That's how you make a connection and keep them reading. So: "You know eating well isn't easy." "You probably have a problem understanding money – you’re not alone." You can see how much stronger that is. *** Want to hear more from me? Stop in at one of my virtual pubs: Copywriters: Go to The Copy Arms, where I serve advice on writing copy and career building - bit.ly/thecopyarms Small business owners, freelancers and solopreneurs: Join me in The Solopreneurs Arms, where you discover how to market yourself better and sell more - bit.ly/thesoloarms

Martin Sayers

Head of Brand and Content at MFG Health Consulting

4mo

The first one is better Stanley. Or, something like - For you - the one who refuses to blend in.

Junko Okada

Helping skilled professionals & entrepreneurs take the right next step. Professional & Personal Development | Visual Mapping

4mo

Examples are always the easiest to understand and implement. I’ll keep the copy simple and direct—it’s a daily practice and adjustment. Martin Sayers

Hamza Farooq

Ghostwriter for Fitness CEOs and Founders | Lets turn your fitness expertise into a powerful personal brand that signs you premium clients every month | 6+ years in the fitness industry.

4mo

Talk to one person. Solve one specific problem. Offer one solution. This is how you write copy that converts Martin Sayers

Guus Goorts

Author of 'Genuinely Helpful' | Online Marketing Trainer & Consultant for (Higher) Education Institutions | Europe, Asia & Africa | For effective student recruitment & engagement

4mo

Yes! 'You' is a magic word. Forces you to keep it focused on the reader, one reader at a time.

Karolina Assi

B2B SaaS Copywriter | I write copy that brings you more demos, subscribers & 💰💰💰

4mo

The more direct, the better! I always go for simple and direct copy.

Umar Sulaiman Mailafiya

Helping Founders & Entrepreneurs with landing pages that are results-driven | Web Designer && Copywriter | Wix studio, WordPress, Figma | 3+ years experience

4mo

One of the golden rules of copywriting. Write to an individual not an audience. I often forget this tho.

Dawn Gibson-Fawcett

Highly skilled senior writer & editor | Attention-grabbing SEO content | Business | Tech | Recruitment | Financial Services I Lifestyle | Travel | Academic Research | Health I Wellbeing

4mo

Guilty as charged on this one. Thanks for the tip, Martin - en pointe as usual!

Kazi Azmir

Helping founders keep consistency and get elite-level authority with the power of writing Copywriter at Legiit

4mo

Absolutely. Writing to one person creates a connection. Copy that feels personal is what pulls readers in.

EBERECHUKWU OKOYECHIKA

I create high-value content that helps brands gain 3X more visibility || 30+ high-converting content delivered || SEO Writer | Ghostwriter | Coach | Content Writer | Web3 Specialist | Content Strategist | Public Speaker.

4mo

I just learnt something new. Talk to a person not to a group. Thank you for this Martin Sayers

Jonny Price 🦉

I ghostwrite LinkedIn posts for creator-led businesses

4mo

Love this, Martin. I need to watch out for this. While I'm a liberal sprinkler of YOU-based sentences, the odd crowd-based sentence does sneak in here and there. Thanks for this.

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